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Stellar Love con @AljndroPoetry

[09] We used to be one for each other
[10] you were the salt and I was the pepper
[11] we used to be the sun and the moon eclipse
[12] you were my sweet sugar, I was your dark coffee.

[12] The ants have taken away the sweetness, coffee's
[09] Expired: how flavourless we've become!
[11] Eclipse: Announcer of darkness, how dull our
[10] World, how black the sun, the moon - how impure

[10] The night just gets darker, sadly darker,
[12] my lonely dreams are pale; they are blurred, swamped and drowned.
[11] Where are the stars, the universe in your eyes?
[09] Where is the love, and where are you now?

[11] So here I am – the largest Sea above me
[11] The water calls me to sleep and the salt cleans
[11] My Soul. Frozen Sea where million petals float –
[11] I keep walking – the water closes my eyes –

[11] Could this water satisfy my thirst of you?
[11] Could the longest river in the Milky Way
[11] get me back to you, my shiny stellar love?
[11] May your water arms just hold me tight, again?

[09] But - why do I want to be out of
[11] This navy blue forest when the deer's gleaming
[12] Eyes and the firefly rivers kill the thirst and take
[10] Me away from your loveless irises?

[10] Maybe I just want, need, to close my eyes
[11] dream again my sweet dream of you while I dream
[09] and reach the bright stars that trace your name
[12] and drink you, my tender love, my deep green river

[12] Yes – I could close my eyes to have you once more but
[11] The hold of your arms gently evaporates –
[10] Eternity does not survive on earth
[09] Our love's become petals in the Sea –

etiquetas: english, syllabic
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#1   Una total explosión @AljndroPoetry. Gracias por querer hacer una colaboración en inglés y con los versos imitando un reflejo, qué cosa tan más bonita :-) Muy ameno escribir contigo {0x1f377}
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#2   #1 Un gusto @Glaukopis
No me habría atrevido a hacerlo solo
Fuerte abrazo
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 *   AljndroPoetry AljndroPoetry
#3   Bravo!!! Excelente trabajo... les quedó realmente muy lindo.
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#4   #3 gracias Bro
muy gentil !! :-)
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#5   Guauuuu,
Es una belleza !!!
es una cadencia con un sentir preciosisimo !!! {0x1f60b}
Me ha encantado ir saltando de un verso a otro a cual más bonito ...
Muchas Felicidades !!!

Maravillosoooo!! {0x1f377} {0x1f377}
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#6   #5
ah mi querida ─R─
no puedes sino traer
un ramillete de flores
como siempre
mil gracias, siempre,
mi muy querida amiga !!
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 *   AljndroPoetry AljndroPoetry
#10   #5 Gracias, con usted me gustaría colaborar pronto :-)
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#12   #10 claro Glaukopis ,cuando quieras un placer !
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#7   It's very dificult write, read, feel and understand a poem in English, if this is not your maternal language, but this time, whit this one, it is a beatiful job guys... You really made me feel very good and you made me float on the cotton clouds...
Congratulations both two !!! From my heart !!!
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#8   #7
Thanks so much my dear Lety.
Your words are caresses
to our verses
to our poetry.

It was not an easy effort for me at all.
But I enjoyed it a lot.
"Cheers" to the poetry and to your visit
my dear friend.

Thanks a lot, forever!
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#11   #7 Many thanks, you're very sweet
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#9   Otro trabajo de lujo. Both of you can write in both language and do a great job! I love it! My respect for both!
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#13   #9 thanks Robert
As always, you are so kind.
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#14   Es una obra tejida delicadamente... no domino el idioma,
he tenido que echar mano de la tecnología, sin embargo,
no se deforma demasiado y toca...
y luce esos encadenamientos de uno y otro verso...
es como leer cuatro micro historias en uno,
cómo un tiramisú Poemático... Admirable trabajo... {0x1f3a9} {0x1f3a9}
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#15   Madre mia, mar saciame, luna ilumina ese gran amor, acorta las distancias, que el amor se desborda.
Precioso, brindo por esta colaboración. Abrazos poéticos
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